我的英语专升本笔记
范文1（利弊评述型）：
Part-time Jobs
With the development of science and technology,part-time jobs has aroused great concern among people around us ,As a matter of fact ,Different people hold different opinions about it.
Some people believe part-time jobs has a good effect on our life,On the one hand, It makes us richer, on the other hand, It can help us get a better understanding of life, What’s more , Part-time jobs can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our life experience. As saying goes, Just as every coin has two sides,Other people don’t agree with the above points, For one thing, Sometimes it can be dangerous to be alone,for another, It may affect our study.
Weighing up there two arguments , I consider that both of the arguments have something reasonable and right ,As far as I am concerned ,I firmly believe that its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages, Therefore ,As stated above,We should choose it reasonably according to our own conditions ,Only in this way can we make our world a better place.
范文2（问题解决型）：
Drunk Driving
There exists a social phenomenon, Which has aroused great concern among people around us,That’s drunk driving. As we all know , It is important for us to found a safe, polite, and orderly traffic environment.
Therefore, We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. On the one hand,We should encourage drivers to develop good traffic safety awareness. On the other hand, We should improve public education. What’s more ,we should strengthen legal punishment against drunk driving.Of course, Following these suggestions may not surely solve the problem, But it is worth trying. As the saying goes, Rome was not built in a day.
As stated above, We should keep in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to keep ourselves and others safe. Only in this way can we make our world a better place.
范文3（现象阐述型）：
There exists a social phenomenon, Which has aroused great concern among people around us,That’s drunk driving. Up to now ,It has aroused social discussion form all walks of life.
Why does this phenomenon take place? There are three basic reasons responsible for it . For one thing,Some people are short of the awareness and knowledge about drunk driving ,for another ,The supervision is not powerful enough.In my opinion, We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. On the one hand,We should encourage drivers to develop good traffic safety awareness. On the other hand, We should improve public education. What’s more ,we should strengthen legal punishment against drunk driving.
All in all .we should make full use of its positive aspects and avoid its negative aspects .Only in this way can we make our world a better place.
兼职工作
随着科技的发展，兼职已经引起了我们周围人的极大关注，事实上，不同的人对此有不同的看法。
一些人认为兼职工作对我们的生活有很好的影响，一方面，它使我们更富有，另一方面，它可以帮助我们更好地理解生活，更重要的是，兼职工作不仅可以拓宽我们的视野，还可以丰富我们的生活经验。俗话说，就像每个硬币都有两面性，其他人不同意以上几点，一方面，有时独处是危险的，另一方面，它可能会影响我们的学习。
权衡这两种观点，我认为这两种观点都有合理和正确的地方，就我而言，我坚信它的优点远大于缺点，因此，如上所述，我们应该根据我们自己的条件合理地选择它，只有这样我们才能使我们的世界变得更美好。
酒后驾车
有一个社会现象，已经引起了我们周围人的高度关注，那就是酒驾。众所周知，对我们来说，建立一个安全、礼貌、有序的交通环境是很重要的。
因此，我们应该采取一系列有效的措施来应对这种情况。一方面，我们应该鼓励司机培养良好的交通安全意识。另一方面，我们应该改善公共教育。更重要的是，我们应该加强对酒驾的法律惩罚。
当然，按照这些建议不一定能解决问题，但值得一试。俗话说，罗马不是一天建成的。如上所述，我们应该记住，保护自己和他人的安全是每个人的责任。只有这样，我们才能使我们的世界变得更美好。
有一个社会现象，已经引起了我们周围人的高度关注，那就是酒驾。时至今日，已引起社会各界的广泛讨论。
为什么会出现这种现象?有三个基本原因。一方面，一些人缺乏对酒驾的认识和知识，另一方面，监管不够有力。
在我看来，我们应该采取一系列有效的措施来应对这种情况。一方面，我们应该鼓励司机培养良好的交通安全意识。另一方面，我们应该改善公共教育。更重要的是，我们应该加强对酒驾的法律惩罚。只有这样，我们才能使我们的世界变得更美好。
题目参考：
The importance of self-confidence
The effect of self-confidence
引出：
up to now ,it has aroused social discussion from all walks of life .
as a matter of fact , different people hold different opinions about it .
过渡：
正常过渡：
some people believe it has a good effect on our life .
other people don’t agree with the above points .
we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
of course ,following these suggestions may not surely ,but it is worth trying.
why does this phenomenon take place ? There are three basic reasons responsible for it.
the arguments for this point of view can be listed as follows.
谚语过渡：
as the saying goes ,every coin has two sides .
Rome was not built in a day .
no pain ,no gain.
failure is the mother of success .
a friend in need is a friend indeed.
stay hungry stay foolish
正面论据：
it can bring you courage.
once we gain it ,we will strength to overcome difficulties,
we may finish something impossible .
It brings us closer together .
it can help us find a good job and have a bright future.
it can improve people’s living standards.
it is good for our environment.
we are able to make friends who come from different places.
it make us richer.
it can help us get a better understanding of life.
it can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our life experience.
反面论据：
It may disturb our normal
it can bring us a lot of pressure.
it can waste a lot of time.
it can prevent the social development.
It will make us lose heart.
sometimes it can be dangerous to be alone .
it may affect our study .
现象why论据：
The supervision is not powerful enough.
we are short of the awareness and knowledge about it .
个人总结观点：
The harder we work ,the luckier we will be.
no one and nothing can stop you to success.
we should keep in mind that anything is possible .we should trust in ourselves.
we should keep in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to keep ourselves and others safe.
we must make good use of our time and study hard when we are young.
Laziness makes a man poor , while diligence brings wealth.
I firmly believe that its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages ,
模板：
观点论证
对比选择
现象阐述
问题解决
其它：
as is shown in the picture .
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